You’d be amazed at how often we use more words than we need to express ourselves clearly. Tautology and redundant words (there’s tautology, right away) are everywhere in spoken and written English. If you had to pay per word, rather than pay per click, you could save fortunes by pruning the unnecessary words from almost every sentence you write.
Recently I was browsing a wonderful book, “Troublesome Words,” by US-born, UK-based former UK Times and Independent journalist Bill Bryson. Given that Bill has a foot in each language market, I reckon he is one of the best authorities on common sense western English, especially for business.
In the book, Bill shares a number of examples where redundant words clutter sentences and should be chopped off like dead flower heads. Here are some of of them, along with some of my own favourites.
Think you’re not a tautology junkie? Try some of these…
Annual salary of XX p.a. (per annum)
3:00 a.m. in the morning (it’s either 3 o’clock in the morning, or 3:00 a.m. Even if you’re drunk and tired.)
As to whether (whether is enough.)
Both X and Y went to the same party
Very unique (you don’t get more unique than unique.)
Climbed up (although you can, in theory, sometimes climb down)
First conceived (you only ever conceive once)
General consensus (consensus can only be general)
A slight frisson (frissons are usually slight; you don’t get dramatic or hysterical frissons.)
Each and every
Estimate that X is about so much
Front façade (façade, from French and Italian, always faces forward. This word is often used in the UK when architects mean “elevation.”)
Future plans (in this context, plans only exist for the future, surely?)
Plan ahead (can you plan backwards?)
Pre-planned (unless you plan to plan)
Opening gambit (in chess, at least, all gambits are opening moves)
Usual habit (habits can be unusual in nature, but are usual for habit-owner…)
Join together (tautology reaches even into wedding ceremonies)
Link together (is there any other way to link?)
Knots per hour (this makes sailors cringe. A knot is a nautical mile per hour.)
Period of time, moment in time, etc. (All long-winded ways of saying “now.)
Reason why, reason is because (reason is all you need.)
Revert back, reverse back (you can’t revert or reverse forward.)
Close scrutiny, careful scrutiny (scrutiny is always close and careful.)
Self-confessed (you’re the only one who can confess.)
Could picture in my mind (where else can you picture something?)
Thought to myself (to whom else can you think, unless you’re psychic?)
Various different (different things are usually various, and vice versa.)
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Lawyers: the worst tautology / redundant word tyrants of all
Bill Bryson has very rude things to say about lawyers, or rather the legal eagles who put together their seemingly ridiculous, long-winded terminology. Do any of these ring a bell with you?
Aid and abet
Null and void
Ways and means
Without let or hindrance
And how about my own favourites…
Costs and expenses
Agreement, obligation or undertaking
Grant of a relevant planning permission by the local planning authority (who else?)
What are your favourite tautologies and redundant words?
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